my Top 10 Places

1. my Grandma's house (Philippines)- I would like to visit my family's home because I have been away for too long and I miss it.

2. The Banaue Rice Terraces (Philippines)- I just can't stop imagining myself there someday.

3.Underground River (Puerto Princesa, Philippines)- A very unique place and I would like to camp there if possible.

4. Coliseum (Rome) - I really..really wanted to go there when I first learned about it.  It was the most fascinating thing to me.  Now it's just a place for vacation.

5. The Mayan Temples of Tikal (Guatemala)- I wanted to go here ever since I saw the

movie Apocalypto.

6. Yosemite Park (U.S.A)- I was convinced that this is a very amazing place when my dad's cousin went there for vacation.

7. The Atlantis in Dubai   (United Arab Emirates)- I've seen this on t.v. once and they

were still making it.  Now that it's complete that is my dream vacation.

8. Machu Picchu (Peru)- Much like the Mayan temples, this is a very beautiful place and I personally wouldn't mind paying a whole lot to go here because I know it is worth it.

9. Pompeii (Naples, Campania)- When I was first introduced to this famous landmark, I thought about the people that were turned to stone and how interesting it would be if I could see them in person.  

10. Ancient City of Sparta (Sparta)- One of the most fascinating cities to ever exist in my opinion.  They had a controlled society and robust soldiers.  It's truly a mighty nation.

These are the ten places I would visit if I could go anywhere in the world.

The crazy Detective

"I'd rather be anywhere but here, " said the detective as everyone clapped. It seemed like everyone in the station was happy that the detective was forced to resign. That particular event was the turning point of his life. He realized no one really cared about him. His wife and children moved to another state after their divorce. The detective sat in his office for a while gazing at his memorable pictures one last time. He wore a tuxedo with turquoise rhinestone embedded on the front pocket. As he walked out to his limousine, many of his co-workers mocked him. The detective drove to his home thinking about all the good times he had with his family. He thought since his family was gone and he has no one else to turn to, that he might as well not exist in this world.

The next morning before work the detective received a lot of phone calls from his boss and co-workers. They wanted to apologize to him for their crude remarks. Everybody knew the detective had mental issues since his family abandoned him. The agents in the station were afraid something might happen to the detective because he lost his job. The detective wasn't answering his phone and his boss immediately sent two agents to check on the detective. The two agents bust the door open and found a stool in the kitchen and a rope tied to the roof of the house. They found the detective unconscious next to the dining table. The ambulance took him to the hospital and the doctors found the most unusual cause of death. When the investigators put all the evidence together, it was confirmed that the detective choked on mayonnaise while trying to make a hamburger.

A random poem

Roses are red violets are  blue......the end.

roses are red

violets are blue

some poems rhyme

but this one doesn't.

i'm suppose to be

jealous of you  so

if i find a brick

i'll throw it at you

i like cheddar cheese, mayonnaise, 

cologne, badminton, and Rugby

since i can't afford these things

i'll steal them from you.

Finish The Story:

"Get out of the way!" said the pirate, as he tumbled over the waterfall."Why?" asked the young boy.  The pirate made his way to his ship before the young boy could receive an answer.  The young boy could hear guns firing, swords clashing and he waved goodbye at the mysterious pirate as he dashed back to his village.  The pirate jogged to the ships in a cautious manner and thought about the precious lives he would save in the village by sacrificing himself.  The pirate approached a horde of men in a horizontal formation.  He was so agile he slaughtered a tremendous amount of men before he was eventually killed.

 THE END.

a sad time.

I remember a moment in my life when I was really sad.  In second grade, I was treated differently than my classmates.  It made me feel like a puppet or a guinea pig.  Day after day they would bully me and take advantage of me.  It became very disastrous.  The teasing was so contagious not only did my class do this to me, but the three other second grade classes did it also.  I realize now that I was fragile and I went through tremendous pain.  I overcame that problem by not being very social.